When you write a report, you must make sure that the language you use fits the subject of the report and the context in which the report will appear.
You would not use the same words in an oral report to a friend that you would use in a written report to a government minister.
The following passage is the introduction to a government report which has been re-written in a colloquial, everyday style.
Examine the passage and consider how it could be re-written in a more appropriate way.
Move your mouse over the underlined words to see the original text.
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